vidhya iyer

hello cailey,it is a good work. i liked it. your description is really nice. i would like to tell few things. you have used "it" in the beginning instead of ...

it is a good work.good piece for a what to/process essay. The biggest impact learning how to smile has made on me, however, is when I sprint. i think there ...

oh wait. i really don't get what this thing is about. your writing is good. but the story is not up to the mark. if you are going to end ...

it is a nice work. but u can make it better. don't give full sentences. make the readers earn it. give some rhyming to the end or at least make ...

its good. your narration is good. you have given the exact feeling of how it would be to gradually understand what the mother feels for a teenager. that is quite ...

i enjoyed reading. its nice. just include some understanding of unspoken words between the father and daughter in the beginning. it would add more feel to the twist in the ...

its lovely.. gives good feel..

its really nice..! give in some details to highlight the girl's pain for her lost friends and family. that would be nice after all thats the base of the girl's ...